Poets logo

Her Space

by Jessica Boyes

By Jess BoyesPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - October 2022
82
103893184 © Georgerudy | Dreamstime.com

The warmth of his body,

she is the size of a child in his arms as she melts into him.

A long, deep breath he makes in slumber, tickling the base of her neck,

this is her space.

Her eyes closed, a smile comes over her face; his warmth, his heart, the softness of his breath; she allows him to consume her as he sleeps.

Thoughts of this being her forever place crosses her mind; it is all she needs in the world, nothing more,

this her space.

Her heart flutters: it makes her shiver; his body responds by holding her tighter; no words, just love,

this is her time, her moment, her comfort,

her space.

love poems
82

About the Creator

Jess Boyes

From Melbourne, Australia, I love creative writing and food, particularly a good quality cheese or some sort of dairy.

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  2. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

  3. Expert insights and opinions

    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

  4. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

Add your insights

Comments (16)

Sign in to comment
  • Britaniabout a year ago

    Loved this, it took me right to laying with my husband each night. <3

  • Lace Cole2 years ago

    caught my attention. it’s good. thank you for letting me read your words.

  • Eful2 years ago

    Good Job, I love your articles

  • Annie Edwards 2 years ago

    What a beautiful depiction ♥️♥️

  • Fiscus Blanda2 years ago

    Great write up, thank you for sharing!

  • Great writing, I love it!

  • Baru Ku2 years ago

    Very nicely written. Well done.

  • This comment has been deleted

  • Uyvolgi2 years ago

    ery nicely written. Well done.

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Very sweet...

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 years ago

    gorgeous work! Congrats on your TOP STORY! Very well-done!!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Such a sweet, heartfelt poem, great work :) Congrats on the Top Story!

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    Oh, I love it! I can feel it. 😃

  • This was so cozy and wonderful! I loved it!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Lovely!!!👏💖😊💕

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Very nicely written. Well done.

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.