Her Space
by Jessica Boyes
The warmth of his body,
she is the size of a child in his arms as she melts into him.
A long, deep breath he makes in slumber, tickling the base of her neck,
this is her space.
Her eyes closed, a smile comes over her face; his warmth, his heart, the softness of his breath; she allows him to consume her as he sleeps.
Thoughts of this being her forever place crosses her mind; it is all she needs in the world, nothing more,
this her space.
Her heart flutters: it makes her shiver; his body responds by holding her tighter; no words, just love,
this is her time, her moment, her comfort,
her space.
About the Creator
Jess Boyes
From Melbourne, Australia, I love creative writing and food, particularly a good quality cheese or some sort of dairy.
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Comments (16)
Loved this, it took me right to laying with my husband each night. <3
caught my attention. it’s good. thank you for letting me read your words.
Good Job, I love your articles
What a beautiful depiction ♥️♥️
Great write up, thank you for sharing!
Great writing, I love it!
Very nicely written. Well done.
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ery nicely written. Well done.
Very sweet...
gorgeous work! Congrats on your TOP STORY! Very well-done!!
if its her space.. .Parts of his body are next to hers.She would be sharing space.
Such a sweet, heartfelt poem, great work :) Congrats on the Top Story!
Oh, I love it! I can feel it. 😃
This was so cozy and wonderful! I loved it!
Lovely!!!👏💖😊💕
Very nicely written. Well done.