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Embracing in a twilight sky,
celestial bodies entwine,
losing themselves in an
intimate moment of
public affection, displayed.
Sun and moon, perfectly aligned,
enchanted by each other’s touch.
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Randy Baker
Poet, author, essayist.
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (7)
-losing themselves in an intimate moment of public affection,- 😮 Amazing line, Randy! It's pure, unadulterated satisfaction!
Really like this!
A lovely, kindly take on this.
I am blown away.
I love it!❤️ Well done!😊
I must agree with Christy. This is exceptionally worth the read!
Just when I thought I didn't want to read one more In Eclipse poem, because I've read hundreds of them by now, along comes this one! So good. Glad I read it. I especially loved this bit: "losing themselves in an intimate moment of public affection"