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Heaven's Curtain

I see you

By Cathy holmesPublished 12 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - January 2023
Photo by Aaron Visuals on Unsplash

Heaven's drape drawn closed

Through twinkling windows, you're there

Swinging on the moon

inspirationalsad poetry

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Naveed4 days ago

    Well done! Keep pushing forward with your excellent workβ€”congrats!

  • Congratulations on top story and first placeπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉ

  • Grz Colm13 days ago

    Congrats on your placement Cathy! Best wishes!! ☺️

  • Real Poetic14 days ago

    Wow Cathy!!! This is so awesome. You won TWICE with this lovely poem. That is such an accomplishment! Congrats!! 🎊

  • Linda Rivenbark15 days ago

    Absolutely amazing haiku, Cathy! No wonder it is a multi-layer winner! Congratulations!

  • Mesh Toraskar16 days ago

    Congratulations Cathy! This one was my favourite!!!

  • Paul Stewart16 days ago

    Yay, buddy! What a champ. Congrats for placing with this wonderful piece. Congrats congrats congrats!

  • Daphne Sampson16 days ago

    Absolutely beautiful!

  • Alexis Wellmaker16 days ago

    Insightful and versatile ... "Heaven's Curtain" can carry different meanings for many people during various times throughout their lives. Congratulations, Cathy!❀️

  • Kristen Balyeat17 days ago

    This piece is pure magic! I am SO EXCITED for you, my friend! Wow! I read this at least a billion times. Totally captivated by the imagery of it. Great work, Cathy! So elated for you!

  • Naveed17 days ago

    Congratulations! Keep up the great work!"β€πŸ’–πŸ‘

  • So happy you placed this gorgeous piece for the vocal awards! Congratulations

  • Shirley Belk17 days ago

    Love it! So glad you got appreciated!

  • Mariann Carroll17 days ago

    Yahhh! Congratulations πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸ†β€οΈ

  • Still enchanted. Congratulations, Cathy!

  • Phil Flannery17 days ago

    Congratulations, Cathy

  • Ahhhhh!!!! I'm soooooo excited!!!! You freaking wonnnnn this!!!! Congratulations!!!!

  • JBaz17 days ago

    Congratulations Cathy. This truly was a beautiful entry

  • Mackenzie Davis17 days ago

    Congratulations, Cathy!! πŸ’—πŸ‘πŸŽ‰ This was my favorite of the bunch.

  • Gerald Holmes17 days ago

    Congrats on your win Sis. So well deserved

  • Caroline Jane17 days ago

    Wonderful!!! Congratulations Cathy!!!

  • Hannah Moore17 days ago

    Congratulations! Wonderful haiku!

  • Babs Iverson17 days ago

    Woohoo!!! Congratulations on the 2nd place win!!!πŸ’•β€οΈβ€οΈ

  • Judey Kalchik 17 days ago

    Cathy- I know she sees you, too, and is glowing with pride, today and every day. Congratulations! Love you

  • Mackenzie Davis3 months ago

    Amazing. β€˜Nuff said. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ So many congratulations! I know I am super late, but really, this is incredible.

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