Heaven's drape drawn closed
Through twinkling windows, you're there
Swinging on the moon
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
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Arguments were carefully researched and presented
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After a long day in the department, Emily dropped her worn and tired dark leather bag on the counter before navigating through the small and disordered kitchen to grab a cold beer from a contrarily empty fridge. She hadn't had a chance to unpack since moving from Newcastle to Glasgow, let alone shop for sustenance, except for cold brews naturally.
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Comments (151)
Somehow I missed this and I am so glad I found it!
Not sure how I missed this one, it's amazing!
Well done! Keep pushing forward with your excellent work—congrats!
Congratulations on top story and first place🎉🎉🎉🌹🌹🌹
Congrats on your placement Cathy! Best wishes!! ☺️
Wow Cathy!!! This is so awesome. You won TWICE with this lovely poem. That is such an accomplishment! Congrats!! 🎊
Absolutely amazing haiku, Cathy! No wonder it is a multi-layer winner! Congratulations!
Congratulations Cathy! This one was my favourite!!!
Yay, buddy! What a champ. Congrats for placing with this wonderful piece. Congrats congrats congrats!
Absolutely beautiful!
Insightful and versatile ... "Heaven's Curtain" can carry different meanings for many people during various times throughout their lives. Congratulations, Cathy!❤️
This piece is pure magic! I am SO EXCITED for you, my friend! Wow! I read this at least a billion times. Totally captivated by the imagery of it. Great work, Cathy! So elated for you!
Congratulations! Keep up the great work!"❤💖👍
So happy you placed this gorgeous piece for the vocal awards! Congratulations
Love it! So glad you got appreciated!
Yahhh! Congratulations 🎉🎈🏆❤️
Still enchanted. Congratulations, Cathy!
Congratulations, Cathy
Ahhhhh!!!! I'm soooooo excited!!!! You freaking wonnnnn this!!!! Congratulations!!!!
Congratulations Cathy. This truly was a beautiful entry
Congratulations, Cathy!! 💗👏🎉 This was my favorite of the bunch.
Congrats on your win Sis. So well deserved
Wonderful!!! Congratulations Cathy!!!
Congratulations! Wonderful haiku!
Woohoo!!! Congratulations on the 2nd place win!!!💕❤️❤️