If hell is hot, would that make heaven cold?
Does anyone know the weather up there?
I’m just trying to prepare.
Will I need a trench coat?
In order to sleep through the night…
Have I done enough good deeds to make
It through the light?
How should I greet the creator?
I don’t wanna come off as impolite.
I’ve done a lot of shit in my life.
But, at least I’ve tried to make it right.
What’s waiting for me,
When my light begins to dim low?
I hope before it burns out,
I visit all the places I wanna go.
Therefore, when the end comes calling,
I’ve lived my life to the fullest.
Instead of stalling…
I could do all of this and still go to hell.
There’s really no way to tell…
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Comments (2)
Huh, I never thought whether heaven is cold. That's a good question! I don't do well in cold environment 😅
Back heavy so you are prepared either way! 😂