Green River Girls
For Two Of My Favourite Friends
This is a poem for a friend of mine and her daughter. I see them every day and they always make me happy.
We must obviously include Creedence Clearwater Revival’s “Green River”.
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Every Day I See Their Smiles
Happiness With Them All The While
Reading Tolkien, So Cool Awhirl
Yes They Are The Green River Girls
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Lord of The Rings The Hobbit Too
Snuggling Together, Me And You
Autumn, Mom And The Cat As Well
Yes They Are The Green River Girls
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For Each Other So Full Of Pride
Mom And Autumn Are Side By Side
So Much Love In These Two Ladies
With Hugs For Each Other, Hey Yah
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The Pride Flag These Girls Will Unfurl
Yes They Are The Green River Girls
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Whispering Woods Challenge Winners
Congratulations to Morgan Christy Rickards for their winning Whispering Woods story, Guardian at the Gate. Morgan has been a Vocal creator since February 2021, and this is their first time placing in Challenge — well done, starting with a win! Guardian at the Gate draws evocatively from Welsh tales of the Cantre'r Gwaelod, a lost sunken kingdom between the forest and the sea. Heledd’s dangerous adventure pulls her towards the water but her spirit is anchored in the woods: Morgan’s writing is atmospheric and exciting.
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Green River Girls. Ah, this made me grin! So lovely
Beautiful picture of these two special ladies. A touching tribute.
this is lovely
This was wonderful!
Fabulous!!!💖💕