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GIRL

G Tautogram

By Babs IversonPublished about a year ago โ€ข Updated about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
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GIRL
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Girl

Gal

Gorgeous

Generous

Gratification

Giving garden goods gratefully.

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Gail

Grin

Gallant

Gifted gal

Gained given good grades

Graduated Geologist.

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Writer's Notes: Love the letter G! The letter G sounds like "gee!" G is the letter used in this Tautogram for the Vocal media challenge. A reminder, in a Tautogram, all the words begin with the same letter. GIRL was written for the Tautogram Challenge.

Are you familiar with the format used in GIRL? The Fibonacci poem format sequence is 1-1-2-3-5-8. The numbers equal the syllables in each line. The six-line poem has a total of twenty syllables.

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Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Nicely done, Babs! ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

  • Really lovely!!! Great Tautogram!

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Wonderful work Babs!!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    You go Girl! Loved this one and the explanation of the structure. Kudos!

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Awesome, Babs!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    The was brilliant ๐Ÿฅฐ

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    Super impressed you were able to craft your Tautogram into another poetic format!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Fantastic, love the Fibonacci structure!

  • I'm so happy to see you write a Fibonacci again! I loved this!

  • I love the way you formatted the poem. Quite beautiful. I wish you the most luck in the contest!

  • Nicely done. Autobiographical perchance? I hate to have to point this out, but the fifth line in the first stanza, "Gains gratification" has six syllables, not five. (I wince as I type that. Please don't hurt me.)

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Great!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’•

  • Lea Waske about a year ago

    I must try that format one day. Gifted gal you wrote about!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Love this and the strong ending โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Pretty smart girl/gal. Gee this is great.

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Fun Tautogram/fibanacci Girl! ๐Ÿฅฐ

  • E.K. Danielsabout a year ago

    Love the Fibonacci inclusion!

  • J. Delaney-Howeabout a year ago

    Great job! Very creative with the format and glad you explained it. I learned something new!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    This is wonderful

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    Wow, Babs. Way to go above and beyond with Your taut tautogram. Lamar made a quad-ku for the letter C and You made yours into a Fibonacci. Superb.

  • Good oneโœจ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ˜‰

  • Mohamed Jakkathabout a year ago

    Thank you for sharing your tautogram poem "GIRL" and explaining the Fibonacci poem format sequence. It's great to see how you incorporated both formats in your piece. Keep up the good work!

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    This is very cute!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    How cool and also wow, thatโ€™s a complex poem!

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Excellent

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