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From Pebble to Gold

- From Despair to Enlightenment

By Dawnxisoul393artPublished 3 days ago 2 min read

A young man, weary, with a heart so heavy

Sought the wise to ease his sorrow's tether

"Why is fate so cruel, so painfully unfair?"

He pleaded, his eyes filled with despair

The sage, with a gleam in his weathered eyes

Picked up a pebble, a simple, common prize

He tossed it, with a flick of his wizened hand

Into a pile of rocks, across the scattered land

"Go, my child, and find the pebble I have thrown"

The wise man said, his voice calm, yet clearly shown

The young man searched, his hands toiling with great care

But amidst the stones, the pebble was nowhere to be there

Defeated, he returned, his spirit now subdued

When the sage, without a word, seized the youth's gold ring

He hurled it, with a mighty swing, into the rocky mound

And said, "Now, retrieve the ring that I have found"

With renewed vigor, the young man scanned the ground

Until, a glimmer of gold, his searching eyes had found

The ring, shining bright, stood out from the rest

And the young man's heart, with a newfound hope, was blessed

The wise man, silent, let the lesson sink within

As the youth's realization began to dawn, his mind to win

"If I am but a pebble, unremarkable and plain

How can I expect life's riches, its blessings to attain?"

He bowed his head, his heart now filled with clarity

"The fault was not in fate, but in my own depravity

I have been so consumed by my own self-pity

That I've failed to see the power within, my own inherent ability"

The sage nodded, a smile upon his weathered face

"The path to fulfillment lies not in fate's embrace

But in the choices you make, the person you become

The shine you cultivate, until your light overcomes"

The young man, now enlightened, his spirit reborn

Embraced the lesson, his heart no longer forlorn

"I shall shed my pebble-like existence, and become gold

Shining bright, my story yet to be told"

With renewed determination, he set forth anew

Leaving behind the sorrows that once held him askew

For in the wise man's lesson, he had found the key

To unlock the greatness that lay within, waiting to be free

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Postscript:

As the final words of this poetic parable fade, a profound sense of transformation and empowerment lingers in the air, the journey we have witnessed, from the young man's initial despair to his ultimate enlightenment, serves as a powerful reminder that the true measure of our lives lies not in the whims of fate, but in the choices we make and the person we choose to become. Through the sage's masterful lesson, we have been reminded that we are not mere pebbles, insignificant and unremarkable, but gems waiting to be polished and unleashed upon the world, it is our responsibility to shed the mantle of self-pity, to cultivate the inherent brilliance within, and to forge a future that shines as brightly as the golden ring the young man reclaimed. These verses have inspired us to embrace our own power, to reflect on the distractions that have hindered our growth, and to undertake the courageous journey of self-actualization, for in the end, it is not fate that defines us, but the extraordinary that we are capable of becoming.

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About the Creator

Dawnxisoul393art

Couple from HK. Dr. Daniel K Lam has got his degrees in Anglia Ruskin University, Cambridge(ARU has its origins in the Cambridge School of Art, which was opened in 1858 by John Ruskin), Doris H Lam has graduated from GFAA with MFA degree.

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Comments (6)

  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)about 16 hours ago

    Best! I love it!

  • CHRISTIAN P2 days ago

    Nicely how u depict the true expression of life in your story 👏

  • Sherif Saad3 days ago

    So amazing

  • Andrea Corwin 3 days ago

    This is beautiful and a teaching moment - pause and reflect and realize how we can polish ourselves and shine light into the world. Bravo!

  • Gerard DiLeo3 days ago

    A wonderful achievement. You brought new life to an inherent truth that is often overlooked.

  • shanmuga priya3 days ago

    It's a true masterpiece !

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