Fountain Pen Heart
A Song of Connection
Photo by Alvaro Serrano on Unsplash
Your fountain pen heart
Bleeding warmth onto my soul
In cursive kisses
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Your strong, dextrous hand
Sparks hormonal attachment
Sculpted on my skin
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Your acrylic mind
Preserving the veil of my
Watercolour smiles
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Your poetic soul
A sonnet of connection
Singing serenely
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (46)
Though I know this wasn't what Bulwer-Lytton meant when he wrote "The pen is mightier than the sword", I think it can stand as an improved alternate interpretation! Beautiful!
Nice article....please visit my story
A unique tribute to a love. Fantastic job.
"cursive kisses" and "watercolour smiles" - a thing of beauty Cathy and congrats on the TS!
Love the first stanza. Congrats!
Great work!....Congrats on the Top story...
Well done! Keep pushing forward with your excellent workβcongrats!
Marvelous work, Cathy! Congrats!
Beautiful piece that deserves accolades
Nicely done Beautiful
I'm so happy this piece of beauty got a Top Story! Congratulations Queen!
I missed this one! Absolutely gorgeous, each and every line! Beautiful work as always, my dear friend! As a side, do you write with fountain pen? π«ππ«
Beautiful and congratulations on Top Story
Beautiful!! Well deserved Top Story
I love this Cathy! Excellent work!
Great title for great poem!
There is a story behind this that I would love to read. π₯° Congratulations on a gorgeously soulful poem.
This is so well penned. I have no clue how I missed this one! The elegance in your writing ability is hypnotic. Your ability to create such a picture with little stanzas is spectacular. Congratulations! I absolutely loved this line. βYour poetic soul A sonnet of connectionβ It was truly ethereal to read.
BEAUTIFUL
Oh so lovely...just beautiful language, my friend :) Congrats on Top Story, Queen!
They took their time! Conratulations x So beautifully done π€
How in the heck was I not already subscribed to you??? I swear I did a while ago. Either way... This was so beautiful, new subscriber! Lol
Nicely done
Very well written! BRAVO!
Nice message in a great poem/song! β€οΈπ