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Fountain Pen Heart

A Song of Connection

By Cathy holmesPublished 5 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - December 2023
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Photo by Alvaro Serrano on Unsplash

Your fountain pen heart

Bleeding warmth onto my soul

In cursive kisses

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Your strong, dextrous hand

Sparks hormonal attachment

Sculpted on my skin

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Your acrylic mind

Preserving the veil of my

Watercolour smiles

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Your poetic soul

A sonnet of connection

Singing serenely

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About the Creator

Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • C. Rommial Butler5 months ago

    Though I know this wasn't what Bulwer-Lytton meant when he wrote "The pen is mightier than the sword", I think it can stand as an improved alternate interpretation! Beautiful!

  • My Life care ideas5 months ago

    Nice article....please visit my story

  • M. Rigby Barington5 months ago

    A unique tribute to a love. Fantastic job.

  • Brenton F5 months ago

    "cursive kisses" and "watercolour smiles" - a thing of beauty Cathy and congrats on the TS!

  • K. Kocheryan5 months ago

    Love the first stanza. Congrats!

  • Sugan Ya 5 months ago

    Great work!....Congrats on the Top story...

  • Test5 months ago

    Well done! Keep pushing forward with your excellent workβ€”congrats!

  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Marvelous work, Cathy! Congrats!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby5 months ago

    Beautiful piece that deserves accolades

  • Avila Osinta 5 months ago

    Nicely done Beautiful

  • I'm so happy this piece of beauty got a Top Story! Congratulations Queen!

  • Kristen Balyeat5 months ago

    I missed this one! Absolutely gorgeous, each and every line! Beautiful work as always, my dear friend! As a side, do you write with fountain pen? πŸ’«πŸ’žπŸ’«

  • C. H. Richard5 months ago

    Beautiful and congratulations on Top Story

  • Atomic Historian5 months ago

    Beautiful!! Well deserved Top Story

  • Donna Fox (HKB)5 months ago

    I love this Cathy! Excellent work!

  • Paul Levinson5 months ago

    Great title for great poem!

  • Caroline Jane5 months ago

    There is a story behind this that I would love to read. πŸ₯° Congratulations on a gorgeously soulful poem.

  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    This is so well penned. I have no clue how I missed this one! The elegance in your writing ability is hypnotic. Your ability to create such a picture with little stanzas is spectacular. Congratulations! I absolutely loved this line. β€œYour poetic soul A sonnet of connection” It was truly ethereal to read.

  • BEAUTIFUL

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    Oh so lovely...just beautiful language, my friend :) Congrats on Top Story, Queen!

  • Test5 months ago

    They took their time! Conratulations x So beautifully done 🀍

  • Tressa Rose5 months ago

    How in the heck was I not already subscribed to you??? I swear I did a while ago. Either way... This was so beautiful, new subscriber! Lol

  • Nicely done

  • Tiffany Gordon 5 months ago

    Very well written! BRAVO!

  • Denise E Lindquist5 months ago

    Nice message in a great poem/song! β€οΈπŸ’•

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