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Time Capsule for Mental Health

By Mariann CarrollPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Flashbacks
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Flashback of life Storms

Trauma brawling from within

Stuck in our memory

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Tiffany Gordon 9 days ago

    Brilliant work! BRAVO!

  • Jazzy 9 months ago

    Outstanding

  • Grz Colm9 months ago

    Great to read this! It’s really good too, with a relevant message. Don’t think I knew you back then as I’ve only been more active on Vocal this year.

  • Denise E Lindquist9 months ago

    Nice!! ❤️

  • C. H. Richard12 months ago

    That they are - those storms 💜 Beautiful

  • Chloe Gilholy12 months ago

    Brilliant! Life storms could represent anything but they are valid and ours to bare.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    So well said! A really beautiful and relatable piece! 💜 Great work, Mariann!

  • Adam Stanbridgeabout a year ago

    At least they are only stuck in our memory now. :)

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Memories good and bad. Thay are our cross th bear, bear them well!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Ahhh, gotta love them thought capsules. Some of them surface at the wrong time. Loved it!

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    Well put. *hugs

  • Jason Ray Morton about a year ago

    That resonates.

  • Misha Kellyabout a year ago

    Really powerful!

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    This is a very moving haiku!

  • Gosh, this was so relatable! It always happens to me. Hope you're doing okay my friend

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Awesome!!! Loving it!!!

  • Talia Devoraabout a year ago

    Very relatable to me. Well done Mariann!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Wow, you captured that perfectly! I wish I could unstick so many and be rid of them. Really well done :)

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Inner turmoil beautifully captured. ❤️'d and subscribed

  • Am there with you

  • Clyde E. Dawkinsabout a year ago

    Very very deep!

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