Eggplant-purple on the highway—
Carefree on the crescent, California coast,
Little do our parents know: we’re teenaged spirit chasing woes with phantom weed and gumdrop ghosts.
In our Mitsubishi Porsche Eclipse, we are young and we
Pretend we speak, and hear, and
See no evil (while we) float off Earth with moonshinebeams into the Sun...
Every now and then, I reminisce about our time in that Eclipse (and how we) got on fire’s last nerve, just for fun.
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-Gina C. 🧚♀️✨
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Thank you so much for all your support! 🥹 I'm around a little less these days, but I'm still here and am still trying to read all your wonderful work when I'm able to. 🥹
About the Creator
Gina C.
Achievements:
- Twice-published in Vocal's Moment of Freedom Collection:
Free-Form poet of ethereal style🧚♀️✨
Fantasy writer
A sucker for a good rhyme☺️
Fueled by a conflicted soul of fire & water
A Few Moments More
You’ll give it one more minute, and then you’re headed back inside. It’s pretty chilly out, after all. Not that that’s a real issue - you’ve stood out here for longer, and in colder weather. The snow is nearly gone already; tiny, dirt-stained islands of the stuff form a shrinking archipelago dotting the sea of green that is your backyard. Striations of sunlight dance through the trees at the edge of the woods and paint the scene in a camouflage of brown, green, and gold.
By Gabriel Huizenga6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (9)
Love the picture, and the topic you choose for this poem, teenage love .
I think of twilight with the purple
I could feel the wonder and invincibility of youth bleeding through in this. Made me nostalgic :) and when did I last do anything 'just for fun' ?
Not me thinking something entirely different when I saw eggplant 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I loved the angle you went for here in this entry. Very clever! Loved your beautiful Acrostic!
It reminds me of a story I heard from VINwiki. This guy used to have a Mitsubishi Eclipse and while driving with his girlfriend, he blew past a police officer hiding behind a ramp going 140mph, and after a minute, quickly got off the highway and pulled into a gas station where they waited for the police cruisers to pass by before taking the back roads to drive home. Lowkey, kind of reminds me when I raced a coworker after an early morning shift. I was binging "Wangan Midnight" anime and was thinking "Wouldn't it be cool to have a storyline where people are all on the highway getting to their place of work, and it's called "Morning Stockers." It shows who's saved up money for cars, who can buy what they want, and who's stuck with what they got. Sure, some kid in a Ford Taurus might not be able to compete with a business man's Porsche 911, but that doesn't mean that he can't try." Like, there's a magical freedom that having a vehicle gives You.
Oh wow. This is amazing and I'm reminiscing about teenage days and stupidity.
Oh lord this made me nostalgic for something I suspect I never really was.
Great Great:) and I'm so sorry too i have been so MIA
Love it!!! 💕❤️❤️