“Filthy Vermin” 🪳
“To Squash or not to Squash your Goombas?”..
Quick Note: this free verse is a little about self-doubt, the things that sometimes bring us down and learning how to break the dis-identification from the mind - I.e taken from Eckhart Tolle’s books.
“You are not your mind -
You are not your thoughts” -
Someone had to remind me of this,
As we are all so much more than
These limiting constructs!
Those stories created by our minds, mean very little
in the grand scheme of things.
I am not a filthy vermin even it it feels like it at times!
We are not even a lump of human flesh -
(Even if it might feel that way on occasion too!)
We’re expansive, all connected —————
— tied together with our similar energies/personalities,
our collective consciousness, our perceived imperfections &
Our overriding connection with source and our planet.
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Why, I must ask, do we sometimes feel the compulsive need
To tear ourselves down?!
Is it, because we’ve been torn down by others before?
Or do we think we are fundamentally a bad egg?
Trust me, no one is perfect - even if they try to convince you otherwise,
Listen to the silence,
not the ‘sounds’ - that amount to far less.
Silence is where the answers are - where real peace can be found -
If you just know how to listen…
Resign your control of others’ thoughts,
Focus on you and don’t allow others to dictate our identitities.
“You are not your mind -
You are not your thoughts”.
If, effectively, we are all connected,
then others’ ridicule (in the past or present)
Is a reflection of their own perceived faults & deficiencies.
So, be your own best-friend (a friend Rick - [hi Rick 👋] recently told me)
Something TBH I’ve frequently forgotten how to be,
But self-care & self-love is how (it is said)
One can take their power back!
Adapt to a total and complete acceptance of what is, right NOW,
Rather than trying to fight it (it doesn’t work..)
I miss my best-friend -
Maybe you do too - and we’ve forgotten how
To traverse the divide between our true spirits and our bodies.
Be grateful for what you have and reclaim your power,
Your zest for life, your.. friendliness with yourself.
Take YOUR POWER back!
Focus on your breath & the here right now,
Be a light for others too in order to help raise yours,
There’s far too much darkness in our world,
To stay trapped in its recesses for such a long duration!
Be a light for your neighbours, friends and family.
What’s just one thing I can do today to improve my life or that of another?
Ward off those demonic forces, no matter how tempting & perversely
it feels resigning oneself to the darkness.
Rise up
Chin up
Reach out!
And in the words of the Prophet Super Mario:
“Heeeere I gooooooooooo!!!”
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Comments (29)
This was very raw and heartfelt and truly inspirational. I hope you can see from all the comments just how much your voice is valued and means something to this community. I'm sorry you've been struggling so much. One of my loved ones has been very overwhelmed with anxiety and we are finally getting them to a better place. Thank you for sharing these wonderful words, my friend. And congrats on TS :)
Ohm🧘♀️meditation, calm, 🌈
The Super Mario being the prophet brought a biiiiiig smile 😁 thank you for the share and wisdoms.
I love the drawing from super mario there! Self compassion is a skill we really ought to find easier!
This is such an important message, Grz, and you worded it wonderfully! This is definitely deserving of a Top Story! 🤗❤️
Love the repetition of "not your mind not your thoughts" really well crafted and a beautiful message
“You are not your mind - You are not your thoughts”. well written!!!
Thank you for the great reminder!
Back to say congrats on a brilliant Top Story, pal!
This would be something I needed to hear as a rambunctious teenager lol, I really love the mantra of not being your mind or thoughts, clever and truly hopeful in a positive light
Congratulations on the top story.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
...Fundamentally a bad egg? - "I am not my yolk, i am not my albumen"! A highly thought provoking piece that demands several re-reads. Congrats Grz!
Congrats on the TS! 💖
Been telling you that from day one we met. Introvert that you are. It has been a while and you came back swinging for sure. Just embrace the deep thinker that you are and know that it is a good thing, just project into positivity. Congrats.
Congratulations 🎉🎉 for top story very impressive and well deserved story
So glad this made top story. Very important and well composed message
This is amazing! Thank you for the uplift! xx
This should be played over a speaking during a meditation session. Wonderful words!
I love this. Sometimes I'm not happy with some of my thoughts. I think, wow, did I really just think that? You don't have complete control over your brain. It throw you curve balls.
Heyyyyy G! I was soooo happy to see your name in my notifications! Your poem was extremely powerful and profound. Be your own best friend. That's so so true! Because in the end, we only have ourselves. Never lose faith. Loved your poem. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
I feel better already. You always know the right words to say in these self-help poems. Triple thanks for sharing!
That last line... I can hear it my mind sooo well!! Love that lighthearted ending to a poem that felt like a great reminder to be kind to yourself and show mercy in the eyes of your own critique! Great piece Grz!!
💖 wonderful message
❤ it! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾