Fear
Some poems just don't need subtitles
Hold it in, hold it in, they'll see you
Hold it in, hold it in, they'll know
Hold it in, hold it in, you'll disappoint them
Hold it in, hold it in, they'll go
Hold it in, hold it in, you're bluffing
Hold it in, hold it in, it's stuffing
Hold it in, hold it in, you'll cry
Hold it in, hold it in, you'll die
Hold it in, hold it in, they'll blame you
Hold it in, hold it in, they'll shame you
Hold it in, hold it in, they'll judge you
Take you away
to the
a
byss
~S.L.
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Shannon Loewen
Hi there :) I use poetry as a processing tool and only recently began to share my works. Thank you for reading them <3
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