it was Fate that we met that day -
when I fell into your arms -
slid on thin air -
felt your grip on me
and met your eyes -
eyes I knew
from long ago
you are not just the love of my life
this time
but the love of all of my past ones
and all that will come
once we die
at the end of our full life
and are born into a new time -
like this one
and my past ones, too
I will feel a part of me is gone -
but I will know Fate has Her plan
and so I will live
and I will wait
for your soul to meet mine
once more
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Love is definitely patient! This was so beautifully written! I loved it!