i got tasered by the PSO's
on the Belgrave train
i didn't scan my Myki card
trying to dodge the fuckin rain
i didn't even see the bastards
they came up from behind
between the carriages on a bend
they got me cold and blind
i frothed at the mouth
i twitched then dribbled
i spakked right out
they zapped then giggled
i pissed myself and ripped my pants
basically i was fucked
with no control of my body at all
i gagged then burped then chucked
i twitched like an edgy disco boy
as they electrocuted me some more
i looked like a rejected Picasso model
all bunched and hunched up on the floor
and just when i thought it was over
they laughed and lit me up again
i was covered in piss and shit and snot
embarrassed and in so much pain
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Brenton F
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‘i twitched like an edgy disco boy’ ‘i looked like a rejected Picasso model’ :) :) :)
I can hear the music.....A 35 second psychotic dirge set to Victorian police beating the living.