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“Happy New Year!” she cheerfully said,
but I heard her crying last night in bed.
Wanting to die.
There is never a good reason why.
Ted, you’re dead.
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Comments (12)
Well done!
I might be the only one in 'Ted-confusion.' Cool poem but what did Ted do exactly? I'm lost 😳🤪
That son of a bitch, Ted. This one had some dark humor to it but felt very real too. Love how you squeezed so much into a limerick. Incredible work!
Ah, so many Teds. Try Fred, John, Jeff or Richard instead. Funny stuff.
Uh oh. Ted's on troublllllle. Nicely done. 😁
happy new year!
There are consequences Ted for breaking a girl's heart. Great Limerick.
This is heartbreaking but I'm confused?!? And wishing you a very Happy new year! ❤
Wait, I'm so confused. Who's Ted? Did I miss something? 😅
Wow , this poetry definitely flow well. Happy New Year !!!🎊
Loved your beautiful poem! Happy new year 2024
Heartbreaking!!! Fantastic Limerick!!!❤️❤️💕