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EVOLUTION

for the eclipse challenge

By Babs IversonPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
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EVOLUTION
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Exciting experience nature's event, the eclipse

calms crowds and stirs emotions.

Laugh, love, live life

in

positivity.

Spiritual stimulation

enterwined evermore.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Writer's notes: Thank you for reading. You are appreaciated.

My acrostic poem was written for Vocal's the eclipse challenge.

The prompt, " Write an acrostic poem using this word: eclipse.

On April 8, 2024, a total solar eclipse will cross North America, passing over Mexico, the United States, and Canada. An eclipse, a cosmic phenomenon and a word with multiple meanings, serves as the focal point of this challenge. We invite you to craft an acrostic poem using the word "eclipse." An acrostic poem is a form of poetry where the initial letters of each line spell out a word or message when read vertically.

The eclipse symbolizes not only the celestial event where one celestial body obscures another, but it also metaphorically signifies concealment, transformation, and even revelation."

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Clyde E. Dawkins23 days ago

    Excellent!!! Congrats on Top Story!!!

  • Well done!!! Great job, Babs!!!

  • Thomas Jefferson27 days ago

    Cherish the people around you because they make life worth living. Make the most of every day and live it to the fullest because we never know how much time we have left. I wish you good health, a bright future and a happy life. May you always be surrounded by love and support. 🙏🙏🙏

  • Novel Allen28 days ago

    The eclipse should eclipse my age and make me 21 again. getting a do over sure sounds like fun. I hope you have fun watching it,

  • Sid Aaron Hirji29 days ago

    Really nice one. I heard about the eclipse and hope I can see videos of it since I don’t own the glasses to see it

  • Heather Zieffle about a month ago

    Lovely poem Babs! "Laugh, Love, Live life", I try and do that every day! ❤

  • Grz Colmabout a month ago

    Yes! It is a ‘spiritual stimulation’! Excellent acrostic Babs. ☺️👏

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a month ago

    Nice job Babs!!❤️😊💕

  • Gina C.about a month ago

    Beautiful and inspiring, Babs! Wonderful work 😍

  • The Dani Writerabout a month ago

    Thanks for writing and sharing, Babs! I'm in 'catch up' mode with everything--including the prompts--so, this is the first I've heard about it and I appreciated your explanation at the end.

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    See...I am a miserable so and so a lot of the time and really probably focus on the sadness and darkness a lot. Then I read something by you Babs and there's that positivity...that brightness. Lovely work, Babs, seriously! :)

  • Kodahabout a month ago

    Incredible acrostic! Fantastic work Babs!! 💝😍😍

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Your Acrostic was so wonderful! I loved it!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    Lovely poem than makes you think. And I also loved that you included an A/N on the alternate meanings of Eclipse.

  • Daphsamabout a month ago

    Very well written!!!

  • Call Me Lesabout a month ago

    So cheerful! I'm excited for the eclipse as well. Loved it 💕

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenlerabout a month ago

    Lovely, Babs, such a hopeful piece. Good luck in the challenge!

  • Colleen Millsteed about a month ago

    Cleverly written Babs. Love it. 😊💕

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a month ago

    Well done!

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a month ago

    Beautifully written. I can visualize your words!!!

  • Jess Boyesabout a month ago

    This is wonderful. A great entry, Babs ☺️

  • Joe Pattersonabout a month ago

    Well done.

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    Beautifully written, Babs!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    I love this line, Spiritual Stimulation. 🥰 Fabulous title 🥰🥰🥰

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