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Envious Moon

Destined for darkness

By Mohammed DarasiPublished 17 days ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Envious Moon
Photo by Marek Okon on Unsplash

Everlasting it seems.

Clouding the world in hollow darkness.

Longing to devour a lantern brighter.

Infinitely envious while

pirating light.

Sequestered to the night with no audience.

Embracing the majesty of the day, even if for a moment.

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About the Creator

Mohammed Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/

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  • The Writer 11 days ago

    beautiful!!!

  • Anthony Terry11 days ago

    Love the way this is written. Keep up the good work

  • ema12 days ago

    I love your poem, "Sequestered to the night with no audience" is a great line!

  • Novel Allen12 days ago

    The bards are turning over in their graves...new bards are making their lights dim. Beautiful. Congrats.

  • Congratulations on your top story

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Shaun Walters12 days ago

    Many wonderful lines!

  • Ameer Bibi12 days ago

    Congratulations πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰ for top story that was very interesting and important information

  • Rosie J. Sargent12 days ago

    "Sequestered to the night with no audience." What a stunning line! Congrats on the top story!

  • I like how this piece explores the contrast between sun and moon, and how darkness temporarily takes the place of light in the day. Personifying makes these objects and concepts more alive, and β€œLonging to devour a lantern brighter.” is a wonderful piece of imagery Mohammed😊

  • congrats on the top story

  • Andrea Corwin 12 days ago

    Wow, what a wonderful poem! Congrats on TS.

  • Dana Crandell12 days ago

    Beautifully written, Mohammed! Congratulations!

  • Mark Graham12 days ago

    Good work this puts a romantic edge to an eclipse.

  • Cathy holmes12 days ago

    This is perfect. Beautifully done.

  • JBaz12 days ago

    Well done, this one was truly great to read

  • Oooo, this was so beautifully written! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Lamar Wiggins17 days ago

    'pirating light' Loved that line! Well done, Mohammed.

  • Shirley Belk17 days ago

    beautiful

  • Lindsay Sfara17 days ago

    Love this! The imagery is really well done in this poem. Great work!

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