Elysian Moments
A Poem of Resplendent Comfort
ELYSIAN MOMENTS
Wind woven sun glittered trees
Waving high above beaded paths of dew and sun
Grace of spring beset eternal
As the autumn wintered world turns to summer season
The green The gold
The rising call of a distant bell
The symphony of fragrance
As tales each new season tells
Hush of hope scented air
Breathed into a shimmering expanse soon to be traversed
Splendid light in splintered mystery
Unfolding as the blossom of rose to rose petaled steps
The moss The stone
The heart-sung melody of life
Winging seed to fruit
In vernal sanctuary’s light
Solace whispers deep and lush
Away translate the wonton world to leaf in blossom song
Sun to moon to daystar’s rise
Here in the color chorus garden my soul will rest upon
About the Creator
Justin Michael Greenway
Author of the contemporary Gothic horror adventure, Ravenword and The House of the Red Death, and West Coast native navigating the alien world of the American Midwest. While a sci-fi fan at heart, his muse is not bound by genre.
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Splendid light in splintered mystery. I loved that line. A very beautiful poem!