Eclipse - What Is Seen In The Light
True Wonders Of The Universe
Events that can obscure the travel of light
Celestial bodies conceal illumination
Leaving for moments, us filled with wonder and delight
In celebration, of sorts, with earth in her creations
Pressing pause on the belief, that we were ever in control
Smaller than we ever wanted to believe
Evidence perhaps, that we are more than what is seen, deeper still the complete oneness of a soul
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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"Pressing pause on the belief, that we were ever in control" is a great line Kelli, and one ties in with the idea of people seeing eclipses as something significant. Nicely done!
Absolutely lovely.
This was very profound! Loved your Acrostric!
And all the world shall pause with awe, causing us to consider. Loving all of this, Kelli, but especially how you end it. Something of a "to be continued" for each of us to contemplate.
That's one way of looking at an eclipse. Good work.
Nice entry, Kelli! Makes me anticipate it!
Beautiful poem! I want to see the eclipse! 😀