Echoes of a Fading Heart
In the quiet sunset, your murmur waits,
A dash of warmth currently falling through fingers.
Love's delicate melody went to a forlorn murmur,
As stars above faint in the midnight sky.
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Recollections like shadows, they delicately sob,
An affection once brilliant now floats into rest.
In the calm, my heart calls out to you,
In any case, in the reverberation, I know it's not something similar.
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Comments (3)
The imagery of a quiet sunset and warmth slipping through fingers evokes a sense of loss and longing. The recollections described as delicate sobs and the realization that the reverberation is not the same add depth to the emotions portrayed. Wonderful and have a nice day!
A beautifully written poem. Well done
I understand you as a love poetry writer. Well done brother!