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Eat a Snickers

Oh dear, not again.

By Cathy holmesPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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photo by Sebbi Strauch on Unsplash

"Eat a Snickers," Vocal.

You can't count when you're hungry.

Eight's more than seven

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Yes, I know line one is 6 syllables. Rules, schmules.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Thanks! Now I have no choice but to go count all the syllables! I need to know which one. 😂

  • Tiffany Gordon 5 months ago

    😁

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    I simply have to say, Love It ❤️💕

  • Rules schmules indeed! Why bother with rules if the judges ain't gonna follow them? It's either the don't bother to count or they don't know how to count. And I don't know which is worse. I hope they rectify their mistake and give the spot to those writers who actually followed the rules!

  • Thavien Yliaster5 months ago

    Perfection.

  • They were pushing the envelope, thinking outside the box, not breaking the rules or being unable to follow them

  • The Dani Writer5 months ago

    LOVE. IT-TAHHHHH 🤣🤣🤣

  • Daphsam5 months ago

    Good message.

  • Gerald Holmes5 months ago

    Yes!! Someone needed to say it.

  • Phil Flannery5 months ago

    You rebel

  • Hannah Moore5 months ago

    Oh dear, really? Could accent differences account?

  • JBaz5 months ago

    ok which one now??? I am unsure but i like the way you presented it.

  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    Lol 😆 👏🏼

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    Perfect response, bahahaha!!

  • Dana Stewart5 months ago

    Unbelievable. Again!

  • Mother Combs5 months ago

    I seen that

  • Donna Renee5 months ago

    Cathy, you are the best. 🤣😁

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Hilarious!!! ROTFL 🤣🤣🤣

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