Easy Does It
Poetry
I live in my pyjamas
I should probably not admit
But the older I become
The less I give a shit
I have many more pyjamas
Then I do have clothes
I know many must be thinking
Dear God, she's one of those
But people shouldn't be so quick
To judge what they don't know
Different people have their reasons
Many secrets that don't show
I don't leave the house much
To be completely honest
I love my bed and my pyjamas
And the comfort that is promised
Wearing clothes can be quite painful
Depending on the day
I'd never put on shoes again
If I ever had my way
Walking can be a challenge
Sometimes breathing even more
So I'm always seeking comfort
Before I'm even out the door
No amount of planning
Can quite take away the sting
So if I have the choice
I'm choosing to stay in
Before the aching turns to burning
And snowballs down the hill
When simply putting my socks on
Can be a tearful test of will
So I have come to peace with it
I'm sure there are many who’ll disagree
One step at a time, easy does it
Is the way that works for me
There's only one person I'll get dressed for
One smiling little face
That I'll make sure I don't disappoint
In this unrelenting unfair race
He has a charming little smile
And thick red unruly hair
I'll brave whatever terrain I must
To show him that I care
I even climbed a climbing frame
Today when he got stuck
When he called for me to save him
I could not believe my luck
I begged him to safely slide
His way back down to me
But he couldn't take a single step
A fear of heights, apparently
And I couldn't just leave him up there
He was overcome with desperation
So I swallowed hard and began to climb
Hiding my frustration
His relief when I finally reached him
Made my screaming body worth it
As I slid with him to freedom
I figured I deserved it
I know better than to put my body
In that kind of situation
If I'd stayed in my pyjamas
Another path he might’ve taken
But now I am the hero
Albeit a crumbling one at best
Back in my pyjamas
And back in bed to get my rest
Tomorrow I will surely pay
For today's miss-judged decision
At least I managed to save my boy
As I pray for my own remission
About the Creator
Sian N. Clutton
A horror and thriller writer at heart, who's recently decided to take a stab at other genres.
I sincerly hope you find something that either touches your soul or scares your socks off.
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Comments (8)
I felt every word in your heart touching story 💜
I am speechless Sian! this work is a masterpiece - the way you use the levels to move the reader into a different depth. Wow... Nice work!
simply brilliant
I don't know what to say. I thought when I started reading it, it was going to be a tirade, a rant that would make me laugh. And then, it threw me completely. I physically felt my face fall as I continued to read. So moving is a trite way to sum it up but I was moved. Emotional and powerful, it talks of what any mother will do to ensure her child is okay. Was not expecting that at all. Great.
I love the way you show the challenges of balancing living with a long term condition and doing things that matter here, really nice job.
Gosh this was so profound and powerful! So beautifully written!
Oh my goodness, the things we do for those kids! This was very good! ❤️
This is so powerful. There is so much to say but I have no words ❤️