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Randy Baker's Prompted #5 Challenge (Second Entry)

By Kendall Defoe Published 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
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Based on Randy Baker's Prompted #5 Challenge (my second entry):

Where is my mind? Quietly,

I consider the Pixies lyric (yesterday,

I saw it in the penultimate scene; time

After time – another lyric – I think of a rhyme

(no luck with my search).

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I’ll try again: it is a beautiful night.

It’s an inspiration for any writer: the sight

Beneath me on the page, the punches thrown…

Am I involved with this challenge at home?

Am I just a complete unknown?

(Too many lyrics!)

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One moment of distraction leaves me open.

Guess I should not talk about it…hey, wait…

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Words used: night, sight, moment, quietly, yesterday, free, home, unknown, rhyme, time, open, search, beneath

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