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Dreams of Sky

Listen to the colour of your dreams ~ The Beatles

By Caroline JanePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Dreams of Sky
Photo by Peter Bromley on Unsplash

Beneath thick knit leaves,

the forest floor knows no sky.

Yet still dreams of it.

inspirational
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About the Creator

Caroline Jane

Warm-blooded vertebrate, domesticated with a preference for the wild. Howls at the moon and forages on the dark side of it. Laughs like a hyena. Fuelled by good times and fairy dust. Writes obsessively with no holes barred.

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  • mark william smithabout a year ago

    great perspective

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    OH, I love this! Great work!

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    Oooh I love this! Sounds like a more traditional haiku in terms of the “wisdom” (not that I’m an expert at haikus by any means 😂). Well done!

  • Ward Norcuttabout a year ago

    oh I don't know if it is cliche...the metaphor certainly works well!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    So motivational!!! 💕😊💖

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Wow. This is great.

  • Mhairi Campbell about a year ago

    Wow that's fab!

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