Dreams of Sky
Listen to the colour of your dreams ~ The Beatles
By Caroline JanePublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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Photo by Peter Bromley on Unsplash
Beneath thick knit leaves,
the forest floor knows no sky.
Yet still dreams of it.
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About the Creator
Caroline Jane
Warm-blooded vertebrate, domesticated with a preference for the wild. Howls at the moon and forages on the dark side of it. Laughs like a hyena. Fuelled by good times and fairy dust. Writes obsessively with no holes barred.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (7)
great perspective
OH, I love this! Great work!
Oooh I love this! Sounds like a more traditional haiku in terms of the “wisdom” (not that I’m an expert at haikus by any means 😂). Well done!
oh I don't know if it is cliche...the metaphor certainly works well!
So motivational!!! 💕😊💖
Wow. This is great.
Wow that's fab!