Don't Let me Fall
I'm slipping away...
Laying low in the shadows...
I staggered while trying to walk through the Darkness...
My Anxiety turned into fear, And I Became someone else...
I'm hoping for you...
While reaching out to another...
Anyone who can Give me Desires...
I want to Love but can I be Loved?
I hungered, for so long, and I had forgotten what it was...
When I'm at my lowest,
Will you at least pick me up?
When I have no Balance...
Will you at least be my crutch?
Don't let me fall...
Please just hold onto me...
I'm slipping away...
Don't let me fall...
I ran around in circles
Inside a world unknown...
How could my once ago Soft heart, Turn into stone...
Don't let me go!
Can you keep me humble,
When My mind is filled with Drama?
I'm on the edge of surfing,
But I don't know about swimming...
All I know is that I Like the Colors of the water...
But what happens when I Fall over...
Will you catch me before I Fall under...
Can you Dive deep?
Will you rescue me?
From my Risky curiosity...
Don't let me Fall...
Please just hold onto me...
I'm slipping away...
Don't let me fall...
I know you'll keep me safe...
Precisely when I thought I was falling into The Deep...
You put me on the float!
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Comments (38)
Just beautiful.
Another beautiful one
This was inspiring. Beautiful!
This was beautiful, heartfelt and engaging! I applaud your bravery to be so vulnerable in this piece!
Beautiful and vulnerable.
Felt it, loved it.
This definitely feels close to heart, great poem, Lonzo.
The poem beautifully captures the feelings of fear and vulnerability, while highlighting the importance of having someone to lean on during difficult times.
I absolutely loved the part about surfing and not diving in. Lord knows I've done plenty of that, looking at something I want so much to do, and for whatever reason am so afraid that I don't deserve it... that I never jump. GREAT poem! ;)
I can feel the emotion in your words. Nicely done my friend.
Beautifully written 👏
Wow, this was deeeep and beautifully written! I could feel it!
This was so wonderful. You really brought the emotion to life.
Wow! I felt I was falling too. I wanted to just reach out and grab you but realized I wasn't there. I'm satisfied with the ending. Great job!
Subtle angst, great for poetry, nice!
Fantastic. Beautifully written.
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Hearted , your poems have such used of words that you grab the reader in . Congrats 🎊
Extraordinary and heart-felt - I love the vulnerability you used - Congrats on your Top Story!
Great piece!
Nice one Hey, I just published a love poem, can read it and give me some feedback.
Never has there been a man who has not fallen..or has there been? https://vocal.media/fiction/the-man-who-never-fell
Congratulations on your Top Story!!! I already said this is my favorite poem of your thus far. And now so many more people get to enjoy this sentimental piece!
Congratulations on the top story!!!
I feel like I can hear your voice very well through your writing. I felt a lot of emotions reading your Poem. 🖥💗