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Dodecahedron

For Heather's 'Unscramble Challenge'

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Introduction

This is for Heather's challenge that you can read below:

I had a few more ideas for this including "Temptation" and "Resolution" but they are both only ten letters and we need twelve for the word, and then "Dodecahedron". I was surprised to find two Wiki definitions for it as I just thought it was a twelve-faced 3D object.

This was meant to be a geometry-based poem but it got hijacked by the Cenobites from Clive Barker's "Hellraiser"

While going through Vocal's Poetry tags for some reason, Pantoum caught my eye. This is my ninth one after my significant date series that finished here:

The music is "Dodecahedron" by Daal

Dodecahedron

⛓️🕸️💀⚰️☠️🕸️⛓️

This Twelve Sided Shape In Your Hand

Crone Penned Code And Horde Of Dread

To Be A Dodo, Turn To Sand

As The Last Sane Thought Leaves Your Head

⛓️

Filled With Code And Bringing Such Dread

Like The Cenobite's Puzzle Cube

As The Last Sane Thought Leaves Your Head

Hook Scars Adorn, Ache Then Erode

⛓️

Like The Cenobite's Puzzle Cube

Sounds So Mad In Your Head They Drone

Hook Scars Adorn And Then Erode

Can't Take Any More, You Are Done

⛓️

Sounds So Mad In Your Head They Drone

Murdered By Dodecahedron

Can't Take Any More, You Are Done

Your Soul Stolen, Your Body Gone

⛓️🕸️💀⚰️☠️🕸️⛓️

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶9 days ago

    Interesting choice of 12 letter word… The things I’m learning on Vocal!😃… had to Google pantoum… want to attempt one now!! The music clip adds great atmosphere!✅

  • Heather Hubler25 days ago

    Ohh, this was so cool!! I loved what you did with the word and image. And wow, it turned a little dark, but I was there for it!!

  • Celia in Underlandabout a month ago

    Gotta admit the darkness in this appealed to my soul 😂 Brilliant challnege entry and love-love-love the cover image!

  • Anna about a month ago

    Beautiful poem! I love it!😊

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Hehehehehhehehehehe I loved how dark this was! Your pantoum was mindblowing!

  • The Cenobites or a staple of Dungeons & Dragons. Nicely shaped, Mike.

  • Caroline Janeabout a month ago

    Goodness me that's good and so quickly turned out!!

  • Judey Kalchik about a month ago

    (★‿★)✍️(◔◡◔) Came here to try out the tip you shared. Thank you!

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    Love this, especially "To Be A Dodo, Turn To Sand As The Last Sane Thought Leaves Your Head" Brilliant!

  • “M”about a month ago

    ❋❤︎❋

  • “M”about a month ago

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