Dirty and Ready
Responding to a haiku challenge
By Kendall Defoe Published 8 months ago β’ Updated 3 months ago β’ 1 min read
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Note: this is based on the following challenge (thanks for your faith in my lasciviousness, Jazzy!):
Touch and heat and once
again...you touch and I say,..
Let's do it again!
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Comments (9)
Very well done.
And maybe again (in my dreams.) Great, hot kaiku!
My favorite for this challenge. π₯ I posted one in Jazzyβs comments that was pure smut. But this! This is so sexy in a subtle way. You managed to capture in 17 syllables how it feels when two people canβt get enough of one another.
That was really well written
Rinse and repeat, lol! This was great!
Great Haiku!
π Might as well kill some more time. Why not? Great entry!
Visions of how "The 40-year-old Virgin" ends.
Yes and a repeat!!!! π you did it, I knew you could! This was great!