I’m sitting watching the sun disappear
Over the seen, across the sea in
The Marvellous, glorious scene
Captures the soul, unseen
Beautifying saline
Unending. Serene
Mesmerising
Gone the heat
The Night
Near
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Author's Note: This is a rewrite of an older poem I published (link below). I think this one (sunset in contrast) is better, but I originally wrote this for a competition in a different website so couldn't post it until now (it didn't place).
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Mohammed Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/
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Comments (4)
I'm so sorry it didn't place 🥺 This was so beautiful!
I would love to be on the beach looking at the sun disappearing
Beautiful , take me there 💓
beautiful! I’m sorry it didn’t place, but also happy it’s now ‘home’ on Vocal 😇🕊️🤍✨