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Dawn's Veil

Diminishing syllables poem

By Mohammed DarasiPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
Dawn's Veil
Photo by Jason Blackeye on Unsplash

I’m sitting watching the sun disappear

Over the seen, across the sea in

The Marvellous, glorious scene

Captures the soul, unseen

Beautifying saline

Unending. Serene


Gone the heat

The Night



Author's Note: This is a rewrite of an older poem I published (link below). I think this one (sunset in contrast) is better, but I originally wrote this for a competition in a different website so couldn't post it until now (it didn't place).

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About the Creator

Mohammed Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran7 months ago

    I'm so sorry it didn't place 🥺 This was so beautiful!

  • Mariann Carroll7 months ago

    Beautiful , take me there 💓

  • beautiful! I’m sorry it didn’t place, but also happy it’s now ‘home’ on Vocal 😇🕊️🤍✨

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