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Darkness Comes

From A Halloween Prompt By Cathy Holmes and also my twenty first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read

This is a villanelle for Halloween from a prompt by Cathy Holmes here, but as always I make it difficult for myself. I am trying not to include any definite Halloween touchstones, but also am putting together a reading of my Edgar Allen Poe inspired β€œAnother Raven” that you can read at the end of this poem.

This is also my twenty first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.

Although I have used it before the music I have chosen is Van Der Graaf Generator's "Darkness"

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The Only Light Is The Stars And The Moon

In This Darkening World Of Old, Old Night

Shadows Hide Things That Can Never Be Shown

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The Swirling Mist That Spreads Around The Stones

A Place That Holds An Unholy Quiet

The Only Light Is The Stars And The Moon

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A Feeling Of Unease, You Are Alone

Any Sound Round Here Now Can Cause A fright

Shadows Hide Things That Can Never Be Shown

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The Freezing Fog Will Bite Into Your Bones

It Drains Your Blood, Your Fading Hold On Life

The Only Light Is The Stars And The Moon

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In The Place Of Darkness All Hope Is Gone

The Pale And Gibbous Moon, Queen Of Old Night

Shadows Hide Things That Can Never Be Shown

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The Stones, The Fog, The Darkness, Now You’re Done

In This Place Pursued By An Evil Wight

The Only Light Is The Stars And The Moon

Shadows Hide Things That Can Never Be Shown

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Comments (8)

  • Lightning Bolt2 years ago

    Love it!!!

  • I could feel the darkness engulfing while I was reading this poem. This was amazingly written! I loved it!

  • C. H. Richard2 years ago

    Love this line "The Shadows hide things that can not be shown." I played the music why reading which added to the haunting factor. Also read "Another Raven" which was excellent. Left comments there too.

  • Sarah Loyd2 years ago

    Spooky and cool. The song is awesome too

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is fabulous, Mike. Love it.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Wonderful!!! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–πŸ’•

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Wonderfully done! Perfect for Halloween with all the spookiness. I enjoyed it :)

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    Oh, my - you did make it it difficult! But well done & creepy. πŸ‘€

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