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Dark and Lonely, The Abyss

Dark poem...content warning I guess?

By Paul StewartPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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Dark and Lonely, The Abyss
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Dark and lonely the abyss

Emptiness, only the mist

Eternal, the clock ticks

Immortal seconds, sticks

Tracks of mine, serpentine

Teeth, bitten promises, mine

Replayed, rest forever delayed

Slayed, mind forever betrayed

Still the clock still ticks

Still the immortal seconds sticks

purgatorial limbo, sinful symbols

judgement stands, justice tumbles

Lay in wait, balance the scales

Smooth - the bait, smooth - their tales

Deceptive intentions, deep the incision

Sadness falls, darkness prevails

Emptiness reigns, justice fails

Still the clock still ticks

Still the immortal seconds sticks

Dark and lonely, the abyss

Emptiness, only the mist

Tracks of mine, serpentine

Teeth, bitten promises, mine

purgatorial limbo, sinful symbols

Judgement stands, justice tumbles

Torn asunder, fragmented existence

Mortal plunder, without resistance

The abyss drains, life and soul

the darkness, the empty hole

avoid the path, the idiot's laugh

beware the staff, the pillager's wrath

in the void, the nothingness

immortal eternal emptiness

waits, patiently in the mist

with serpentine teeth in its midst

the daggers are drawn, fate is assumed

Now all hope has gone, sealing the doomed

sadness falls, darkness prevails

Emptiness reigns, justice fails

Eternal the clock still ticks

Still the immortal seconds sticks

The end the beginning

The beginning the end

darkness falls, sadness prevails

judgement reigns, justice fails

torn asunder, fragmented existence

mortal plunder, without resistance

Remember

Remember

It's just a dream

It's just a dream

Is it?

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Author's Notes: Just a nice little nightmare/horrorish and pretty vague poem.

performance poetrysurreal poetrysocial commentarysad poetryheartbreakfact or fictionCONTENT WARNING
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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    This should be heard performed please! Nifty writing Paul! Is their a syllable count here or no.. some seemed very similar in length! 👍 🌀

  • Whoaaaa, that was more like a fever dream. Like spiralling in and out. I loved this adventure you brought me on! A very Paulitical poem! 🍩🥐

  • Poppy 5 months ago

    Ooo so eery yet alluring

  • To me this sounds like a waking reality where we find ourselves in the valley of despair while believing that we're at the peak where everything past, present & future is downhill from there.

  • Hannah Moore5 months ago

    A ruminant fug, I think.

  • Mother Combs5 months ago

    nice. great flow

  • Real Poetic5 months ago

    I enjoy this poem although it may be vague. That’s what makes it interesting and really gets me thinking. It forces me to reread it to fully grasp what I just read. Great job Paul.

  • Ruth Stewart5 months ago

    Eee! I'm coming home tomorrow. It's not the end of the world. 😳😊👍

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