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... Daddy ...

... I miss you...

By C.B. VisionsPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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(03-11-1949 to 04-12-2004 - his parents died in 2002)

His absence weighs upon my heavy heart,

Memories dance in shadows of the past,

I seek his guidance, though we're torn apart,

In every echo of a love that lasts.

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Memories dance in shadows of the past,

A bond unbroken by the hands of time,

In every echo of a love that lasts,

His spirit lingers, eternally sublime.

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A bond unbroken by the hands of time,

Though tears may fall like rain upon my face,

His spirit lingers, eternally sublime,

In dreams, his laughter fills the empty space.

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Though tears may fall like rain upon my face,

I seek his guidance, though we're torn apart,

In dreams, his laughter fills the empty space,

His absence weighs upon my heavy heart!

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Daddy, there's no day that I miss you!

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About the Creator

C.B. Visions

An author, who writes tales of human encounters with nature and wildlife. I dive into the depths of the human psyche, offering an insights into our connection with the world around us, inviting us on a journeys. (Christian Bass)

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  • Carol Townendabout a month ago

    I felt powerful emotions while reading your poem. It is hard for anyone who loses a parent, and your poem represents love and loss in a very descriptive way.

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    Oh, me too. What a wonderful expression of love and loss

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