Mirrored blue water
Thirst quenching and body drenching
Crystal refreshment
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Thank you for reading this...my 6th...entry into the Quadru-Haiku Challenge.
For something that only consists of 10 words, this proved to be a lot of work getting it just right. Hope the final version makes sense and you enjoy it. If you did, you could leave a comment or simply click the heart. All interactions are greatly appreciated and encouraged. You can also stay updated with my latest work by subscribing!
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (8)
It was indeed very *cool* 🩵 I think it's my favourite of the series! x
You outdid yourself with this one! It's super brilliant!
Cool haiku Paul. 🥰. I felt it.
Nice! Great job!
That made me feel thirsty and refreshed at the same time! Great work on this one ;)
Wowzer buddy, that’s top shelf, love it ❤️
Great job Paul
Very nicely done.