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Come to Me

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By Cathy holmesPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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Come to me with insincerity

hold me with disdain

touch me with your arrogance

caress me with condescension

seduce me with your sweet, sweet lies.

Tease with me audacity

kiss me with derision

stroke me with scorn

lick me with insults,

and I’ll fuck you with good-bye.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    That last line! OOF!

  • A true glutton for punishment..., ...no more.

  • Harsh , sounds like me and Vocal. Excellent work Cathy

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Now who's the brilliant, talented, sailor-mouthed, amazing, Maple Leaf loving poet? Couldn't agree with or love this more!!

  • Rachel Deeming2 months ago

    Cathy, this was excellent. That last line made me laugh. You do this so well. These "Fuck you" poems. I love them!

  • Gerald Holmes2 months ago

    Loved this!!!!!

  • Phil Flannery2 months ago

    Ouch

  • D. J. Reddall2 months ago

    Serrated!

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    I like the choice of the phrase fuck you here. I don't know whether you're just booting this person out or taking your pleasure first!

  • Kodah2 months ago

    Incredible , Cathy! 💓 The ending really ended it all !!!

  • Mic drop! This was so freaking powerful! Your poem kicked ass!

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    Now, that’s a great ending ! Good riddance to that narcissist!!!!

  • JBaz2 months ago

    As I reading this I was thinking, wow Cathy has started to trend in a different way, new feel. Then the ending, welcome back Cathy.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Ok... you've got my attention! The ending was the best answer to the one who thinks they are above it all!

  • Esala Gunathilake2 months ago

    Love and affection never end even people are near the mouth of death.

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    Holy Cathy Holmes! Empower us more and more! Such a word slap back to reality! HURRAH!

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Powerful!!! ❤️❤️💕

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    Oh whoa!! That’s what I’m talking about!! 🤣

  • Caroline Craven2 months ago

    Oof. That last line! What an epic sign off! This was FAB.

  • John Cox2 months ago

    This is priceless, Cathy! That last line is simply amazing!

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler2 months ago

    Yay, Cathy!!! It took a while to learn to be this strong, but you nailed it here, gurl!! Bravo!

  • Donna Renee2 months ago

    Hell yeah!!! That last line is like a hammer.

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Love this! 😍❤️

  • Kendall Defoe 2 months ago

    Hot!

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