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Come to me with insincerity
hold me with disdain
touch me with your arrogance
caress me with condescension
seduce me with your sweet, sweet lies.
Tease with me audacity
kiss me with derision
stroke me with scorn
lick me with insults,
and I’ll fuck you with good-bye.
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (25)
That last line! OOF!
A true glutton for punishment..., ...no more.
Why is there no mic drop emoji? Brilliant! 😁
Harsh , sounds like me and Vocal. Excellent work Cathy
Now who's the brilliant, talented, sailor-mouthed, amazing, Maple Leaf loving poet? Couldn't agree with or love this more!!
Cathy, this was excellent. That last line made me laugh. You do this so well. These "Fuck you" poems. I love them!
Loved this!!!!!
Ouch
Serrated!
I like the choice of the phrase fuck you here. I don't know whether you're just booting this person out or taking your pleasure first!
Incredible , Cathy! 💓 The ending really ended it all !!!
Mic drop! This was so freaking powerful! Your poem kicked ass!
Now, that’s a great ending ! Good riddance to that narcissist!!!!
As I reading this I was thinking, wow Cathy has started to trend in a different way, new feel. Then the ending, welcome back Cathy.
Ok... you've got my attention! The ending was the best answer to the one who thinks they are above it all!
Love and affection never end even people are near the mouth of death.
Holy Cathy Holmes! Empower us more and more! Such a word slap back to reality! HURRAH!
Powerful!!! ❤️❤️💕
Oh whoa!! That’s what I’m talking about!! 🤣
Oof. That last line! What an epic sign off! This was FAB.
This is priceless, Cathy! That last line is simply amazing!
Yay, Cathy!!! It took a while to learn to be this strong, but you nailed it here, gurl!! Bravo!
Hell yeah!!! That last line is like a hammer.
Love this! 😍❤️
Hot!