Circles
Round And Round We Go
it circles back to the beginning
this path we travel on
the losing and winning
every dusk to every dawn
nothing new under the sun
what we will do-s, been done before
it ends as soon as it's begun
like breezes through an old screen door
the difficult paired with the fun
that’s what we all are learning from
don’t give up before it’s won
the saying goes win some lose some
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (7)
Hi Ki - I'm 'Circling' Back. May I take a moment to say: You've made me a 'MoodReader' - never realized I was one. I often scroll through your many topics and carefully SetUp presentations, then decide which one I'm in the mood for at the time; don't think I ever thought of it that way. Your 1000+ stories could line my shelf along with my James Patterson collection. Amazing how the prose just flow out of you. This is meant to be a huge compliment. Please ask me to delete if I've overstepped. - Jk - Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community -
My grandmother used to tell me there's nothing new under the sun. Brought back fond memories for me :)
"May the circle be unbroken" I am reminded of an old southern gospel hymn. Maybe it's not meant to be? You write beautifully.
Was this inspired by our shared oubliette? Regardless, it's as true as it was when Koheleth said, "Vanity of vanities. There is nothing new under the sun."
I love your story
Im a circle within a circle! Well Written! You’re a poetic genius! I love this
Love these lines: "it ends as soon as it's begun like breezes through an old screen door"- so true