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Round And Round We Go

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Circles
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it circles back to the beginning

this path we travel on

the losing and winning

every dusk to every dawn

nothing new under the sun

what we will do-s, been done before

it ends as soon as it's begun

like breezes through an old screen door

the difficult paired with the fun

that’s what we all are learning from

don’t give up before it’s won

the saying goes win some lose some

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Jay Kantor2 months ago

    Hi Ki - I'm 'Circling' Back. May I take a moment to say: You've made me a 'MoodReader' - never realized I was one. I often scroll through your many topics and carefully SetUp presentations, then decide which one I'm in the mood for at the time; don't think I ever thought of it that way. Your 1000+ stories could line my shelf along with my James Patterson collection. Amazing how the prose just flow out of you. This is meant to be a huge compliment. Please ask me to delete if I've overstepped. - Jk - Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community -

  • Shirley Belk2 months ago

    My grandmother used to tell me there's nothing new under the sun. Brought back fond memories for me :)

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    "May the circle be unbroken" I am reminded of an old southern gospel hymn. Maybe it's not meant to be? You write beautifully.

  • Was this inspired by our shared oubliette? Regardless, it's as true as it was when Koheleth said, "Vanity of vanities. There is nothing new under the sun."

  • I love your story

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Im a circle within a circle! Well Written! You’re a poetic genius! I love this

  • Daphsam2 months ago

    Love these lines: "it ends as soon as it's begun like breezes through an old screen door"- so true

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