Chasing to fix Broken Dreams
Rebuilding Hope from Shattered Promises
In twilight's tender, quiet light,
Whispers of lost dreams take flight.
Promises, once strong, now torn apart,
Trust shattered, wandering hearts.
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Soft whispers embraced by night,
Dawn's harsh light now takes its right.
Vows, like petals, gently fall,
Silent now, through it all.
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Blossomed words, now in despair,
Wilting, caught in sorrow’s snare.
Sweet pledges sung, now shadow-bound,
Dreams fading, nowhere to be found.
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Winds of change blow swift and cold,
Echoes of love, fragile and old.
Broken promises, like shattered glass,
Reflect the pain of love’s past.
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Yet hope takes root in fragmented dreams,
A promise to rebuild, it seems.
In darkness, a glimmer shines bright,
Guiding the broken through the night.
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Gather pieces, one by one,
Mend the heartache till the dawn.
In breaking, chances for new romance,
Mending hearts in life's dance.
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Though vows may break and dreams may fray,
New stories weave in life's array.
For every broken promise learned,
In healing's symphony, hearts returned.
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Dr. Jason Benskin
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