Deep in the Ocean there is
Tranquility
Gathering of clouds and the sound of Thunder
Unleash your cacophonous fury
In the Ocean waves ,
I see a mermaid
In a rolling of dark clouds
I see a charades of dark angels
Your power within
Let it shine as bright as the morning sun
Your anger within
Let it set sail like a sinking sun in the ocean
Be like the moon , radiant luminous
meek light of the sun
It does not shine with total brightness
It’s illuminating white dress
Of a silhouette women hour glass
You just stare at her healing power
To stop all wars within the earth
The siren that call to peace
Restore harmony in the stars so bright
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Message Me Afterwards
>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
By D. J. Reddall5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (14)
This is quite beautiful! Love the symbolism and images you created with your words. Many hearts for this one! ♥️ ❤️ 💓 💖
Absolutely lovely.
Wonderful vibrant symbolism. I love it.
It's always a good day when you wake with this kind of beauty in your head. Thank you for sharing
Beautiful! I love the sentiment behind this one!
A siren calling to peace- is that a trap? Very good - thank you for sharing!
Powerful word choices!
Brilliant & beautiful 💖😊💕
Oh my. This is simply beautiful. Well done.
Beautifully written poem with wonderfully impactful language and imagery!
Very beautiful poetry :) Loved the imagery you used. Great work!
Love the visuals and the images in your writing
I love how you connected power to the rising sun and anger to the sinking sun. With power we rise and with anger we sink. Loved all your imageries. Very empowering and beautiful poem!
nice images