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Broken Heart

A breakup

By Rene PetersPublished 2 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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Broken Heart
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My world is falling apart,

Starting with a broken heart

You say, "At least we tried"

But after the call, I just cried

I just want to feel okay

But I doubt that will happen in any way

I felt safe when I was with you

But as of right now, all I am is blue

* * *

Sorry it isn't good. I just had my heart shattered into a million pieces and needed to vent.

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About the Creator

Rene Peters

I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.

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  • Shirley Belk2 months ago

    It's VERY good, but I am so sorry

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    What happen ? I thought all was going well ๐Ÿ˜ขStay strong ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿผ You got this ๐Ÿ’—Sending good vibes

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Hugs from me to you I understand this all too well, good to vent it's a good thing for your health to do

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    It is a great poem. I am so sorry for your shattered heart. Life is so hard sometimes. ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

  • This is exactly how I feel right now. I'm so sorry you feel this way as well ๐Ÿฅบ Sending you lots of love and hugs โค๏ธ

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