Bricks
🧱
I stand Alone
In a Space
With spare parts
That only
Connects
With cemented filling…
I come into unity
And still, I remain Strong.
Do not fear me because of my
stiff besmear…
I'll sit until you shift me.
I'm solid even with a chip!
Use me to Build your foundations,
Assemblage me
I'm more than a Brick❗
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Comments (17)
I agree with Cathy this was excellent
Wow. This is excellent. Well done.
Inspirational & loving it!!!♥️♥️💕
Behold, the stone/brick which the builders rejected has become the chief cornerstone. You're never just a brick.
Awesome poetry 🎉🥳❤️
I like the nice flow and symbolism. Good work!!!
A really creative piece you’ve written. I’ve read and re-read this poem a few times. It’s simple and that’s not to lessen it in any way, I feel some of the best poetry is. Really good job!
Oooo, this was so uplifting and powerful! I loved it!
👍☺️ Is this a metaphor for some sort of inner strength ? I had to read it a few times to see if I’d missed the clues. If it’s is just about bricks that is cool too! 🤣
Very good!
Wonderful poem! The brick has so many amazing qualities :)
This is great!
Well done! I like how there are layers of meaning here. Who would have thought the solitary brick could be such a poetic muse?
Great stuff, Lonzo!
Very Nice!
Lonzo, you never stop amazing me. This poem is SO great!
Owo, awesome