breaking point

a haiku

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 2 months ago • Updated 2 months ago • 1 min read

delicate rain drops

perfectly holding tension

- splat violently

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health, wealth & love related 💫

“When life gives you lemons,

It’s because you are asking for them.

If you want oranges, focus on oranges”

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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 months ago
We give our heart to people, we handle the tensions, and they step on our heart. Splat! Lol. I'm sorry, I know that's now what you meant here but it's the first thing that came to mind. Loved your Haiku!
Cathy holmes2 months ago
I really like how the peace is splattered by the last line. Excellent
Paul Stewart2 months ago
Powerful, comical and sad. Love it, lass!
Jazzy 2 months ago
That end-line really is dramatic and I'm here for it
JD Pernoste and Anneliese Dahl2 months ago
Don't usually like haiku much... too short... but I liked this one. Lovely and can have different meanings 💙 Anneliese
Rachel Deeming2 months ago
So perfect and then splat! Loved this! Sort of funny and sad at the same time.
Kenny Penn2 months ago
Brilliantly done Kayleigh!