delicate rain drops
perfectly holding tension
- splat violently
philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health, wealth & love related 💫
“When life gives you lemons,
It’s because you are asking for them.
If you want oranges, focus on oranges”
How does it work?
We give our heart to people, we handle the tensions, and they step on our heart. Splat! Lol. I'm sorry, I know that's now what you meant here but it's the first thing that came to mind. Loved your Haiku!
I really like how the peace is splattered by the last line. Excellent
Powerful, comical and sad. Love it, lass!
That end-line really is dramatic and I'm here for it
Don't usually like haiku much... too short... but I liked this one. Lovely and can have different meanings 💙 Anneliese
So perfect and then splat! Loved this! Sort of funny and sad at the same time.
Brilliantly done Kayleigh!
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The old saying goes,
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