Breaking Branches
Even the things that appear to be Strong Breaks Breathlessly...
Bountiful Beauty
Breaks Before
Branches Breach Balance,
Brittle Brown Branches...
Beginning Bold
But Breaking
Badly!
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We'z Walking on a Path Ruled By Numbers
This road has felt endless, yet limited; every step tracked. Inching away along this path, I feel trapped. Confined. Left to this narrow passage that may one day amount to something greater. Time is not a concept. Only distance. From start to finish, I laugh and cry and attempt to convince myself that this is worth it. I cannot stray. I must keep going. Every step etched, is a step taken, is measured as more than before. I cannot even recall how I got here. Maybe I don’t even really exist. Just another tick marking off a perceived presence. Of what though? I am just another line drawn. Nothing more, nothing less.
By Oneg In The Arctica day ago in Fiction
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Clever work Lonzo!
Great job Lonzo
great
You nailed this! You did such a great job!
Great Job 👍
Wow! You did the B proud!
Beautiful ♥️ Similiar to life. We will break if we don't find balance.❤️
Well done metaphor. Great piece!
I have to admit, I like the sound of breaking branches when I'm preparing them as kindling for the fire. Not so much when they're still attached to the tree. Highly evocative for me.
Very nicely done.
poetic skill and depth 💓💗💖 it.............
Evocative metaphor. Well done!
There's a lot "between the lines" on this one. Great job!
Nicely done.
Love the depths of this message. Great work!