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BLUE SUITS

Blue Haiku

By Babs IversonPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Career, dress success

Closet blue suits, blue dresses

Retired, no more stress.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    I had a 3-piece blue denim suit in the 70's. Those were fun times.

  • When we first got married, my father-in-law took me out to buy a nice blue suit for work. He said that everyone needs one. Doesn't fit anymore, but I still have it.

  • Darkos8 months ago

    Hahaah again had a laugh! Very Enjoyable one! Somehow I read it more than once because You composed the words with such confidence and humor! a kind of relief and letting go to enjoy life in a more relaxed phase ! It surely deserves more reads and recognition! as it gives a reader such a state of comfort that whole the world need it for now!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Nice looking forward to the day!

  • Julia Schulzabout a year ago

    Great idea! I think you just inspired me!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    love this

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh yeah. Love it

  • Oooo, the freedom of that!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Loved the last line!!!

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    This one is awesome Babs 💕

  • Love This!

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