Biological clock
Waiting for conception
By Lamar WigginsPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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Photo by Andre Adjahoe on Unsplash
Opening doorways,
constantly looking for you
I rummage through keys
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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Comments (16)
Beautiful
This is beautiful yet dripping with the potential sadness of failure to conceive. It reminds me a little of an Ursula Le Guin story I read a long time ago about a woman sweeping outside her home and dreaming of all the children the dust might have formed. Nicely done Lamar!
Love this! Thank you, Lamar.
A great Haiku! And i like the picture too!
Very nicely done.
Superb!!!
Wow! Oh, I love this so much. I feel like this has so many, many meanings. It is deep and thought-provoking, but also nostalgic, loving, and protective. There is also a touch of melancholy there, depending of how you interpret it. Brilliant and clever. Wonderful work!
This is really sweet, luv it
Ahhh. Takes me back to difficult times!
So well crafted. Love it.
This made me gasp in both surprise and delight! Wonderfully done 🤗
Love this Lamar! Well done!
Excellent. I love how you emphasized the word "you." That gives the haiku it's seasonality and cutting point. Very cleverly done.
Our children are definitely our DNA time capsule
Nice Lamar I like it 😀
This was so deep and powerful! Loved your Haiku so much!