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When there’s nothing left to lose,
nothing left to prove,
when I finally lay
empty, bare,
crumpled, broken,
Free.
When I have become truly human.
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Randy Baker
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Comments (3)
Is this an inverse one?
Really lovely!
It's so heartbroken! I hope you're okay!