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Be.

Bona-fide Boldness

By Holly PheniPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Be.
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Be.

Become.

Becoming...

Becoming brave.

Bending, breathing, breaking --

Born breathtaking,

Belonging beyond beauty.

Bona-fide badass --

Be bright,

Boundlessly bestowing blessings.

Be bossy --

Bring bravery, blue blood, brawn --

But beware: brains beat battles.

Born blessed,

Becoming better,

Becoming best.

Be bold.

Believe bravely.

Bloom brilliantly!

Beloved...

Be.

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Holly Pheni

This page is for dreamchasing, adventure, and catharsis. Hope my musings connect with others out there.

Blog: flyingelephantmom.com

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  • Mackenzie Davis11 months ago

    So heartwarming and encouraging. ❤️ I think this is one of the few tautograms that makes sense, keeps the words simple, and is easy to read! The form fits your poem like a glove.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    This was a top story in my book. I loved the structure; it made me pause briefly to take it all in. Great work!

  • R. J. Raniabout a year ago

    Holly, this tautogram brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for writing it, and thank you for sharing this gorgeous message. Now, I'll go be and breathe. Thank you 🤗 🥰

  • Jazmin Fernandezabout a year ago

    So beautiful!!

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    Woahh nicely done! Just the word "Be" has such a powerful meaning and it resonates so well with the way you've written this

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Great mantra with so many great lines! Believe bravely! ❤️

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    As I read I saw many possible allusions to parts of popular book titles by women. Interested if it was planned or happenstance. Bold and bodacious!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Brilliant!!!

  • This was so uplifting and inspirational! Very powerful! I loved it so much!

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    This is beautiful Holly. Anything that comes from sincerity and from the heart is going to be powerful and bold and your tautogram is no exception. I love it. So we'll written and meaningful.

  • J. Delaney-Howeabout a year ago

    This is really good! Nice job.

  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    Great job!... the best version of who we are...

  • Oneg In The Arcticabout a year ago

    Ohhh I love this so much. Winner for me

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Very lovely words. Becoming has so many possibilities,

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Like a Zen mantra...

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful, inspirational. Well done.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Beautifully done - so inspirational!

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Well Done 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

  • Nice one❤️😉

  • Shane Dobbieabout a year ago

    This was a tricky one. Well done.

  • Sonia Heidi Unruhabout a year ago

    Love love this poem! It blooms brilliantly!!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Bonafide Brilliance ! 🥰

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Brilliant!!! 'Brains beat battles' just so many fantastic lines! This was wonderfully affirming and empowering. Bravo!!

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