Awkward Senryu
š š š (Sometimes That's All Can Be Expressed)
They waved at me, and ā
I waved back, till they pointed
At someone behind
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Deasun T. Smyth
Iām a First Nations 17 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.
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By Dana Crandell5 days ago in Writers
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Guilty of this as well.
Lol, I look behind me if I dont know the person . Great Take on the Challenge. I hope you win .
I've done this wayyyy too many times. Lol. š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£
Fabulous!!! Loving this!!!šā¤ļøā¤ļø
Ahhhh yes! And its evil twin- They waved at me, but I glanced over my shoulder. There was no one there.
If I only had a dollar for every time this happened to me. LOL! GREAT job!