Painting a Picture
Is It Awkward Inside The Mind?
By Deasun T. SmythPublished 6 months ago • 1 min read
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Painting a picture
Azure grass, and jade skies
Brush-stroked on purpose?
About the Creator
Deasun T. Smyth
I’m a First Nations 17 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.
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Comments (5)
! Fantastic poem!
I had to pause for a moment, play it out in my mind and take it all in. So beautiful!
Awesome!!! Loved it!!!
Hey, why not! Good piece!
This one really makes you think to be so short! It's deep, in a quiet level. LOVE this! ❤️