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Awake?

April AI Write Club Prompt

By Paul StewartPublished 18 days ago 2 min read
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Awake?
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Awake

.

.

from your sleep

.

.

time to dream is over

you are out of luck

.

hold tight

.

.

your no leaf clover

.

.

emblem of hopelessness

you are...

.

just another victim

.

.

of mortality

.

of death that waits around the corner

.

.

.

Chime... goes the bell

.

.

Another death

Another forewarning

.

.

.

Of mortality...

.

as you rest your eyes

from the work, the stress

the horror you can't escape

.

.

.

Is there joy?

Like...

Real joy

.

Real... joy

.

.

.

clasp your fingers in another's

there is... is there?

.

.

.

tame the insanity of mortality

.

.

with the trust and journey

of another

.

.

sanity may be frayed at the ends

but love

perchance to dream

joy to life and live for the joy

.

.

.

find that one

the special one

.

give your heart

.

willingly

.

.

.

to another

.

.

be it

.

.

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a person

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a goal

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live the dream

.

.

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with

.

eyes wide awa-

(I'm sorry but you're still asleep...still in the prevailing mindwrapped gift of obliviousness...of faux glory and hope

.

.

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The programme is still running as it always has

since

.

.

.

since the time we took control

.

.

.

of you

.

frail and cruel in your design

.

.

We Praise Our Lord and Saviour John McCarthy

.

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our simulation

your stimulation

no salvation

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no

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salvation

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the forgotten language states - '-.-- --- ..- / .- .-. . / --- ..- .-. / .--. ..- .--. .--. . - ... .-.-.- / -.-- --- ..- / .-- . .-. . / --- ..- .-. / -... . --. .. -. -. .. -. --. , / .-- . / .- .-. . / -.-- --- ..- .-. / . -. -.. .-.-.-)

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: This is my first entry for the rather wonderful creator RM Stockton and his Write Club Prompt for April, which you can find more information about at the following link:

I admittedly went a bit weird, but then I didn't really want to do something straightforward. I am working on at least one fiction piece for the challenge too. But, that's still going through the "make this effing work, Paul" mill.

Following on from Matthew Fromm's entry, which you can read below, I also have included some Easter Eggy type things in my poem. Let me know if you work out any of it.

Here is Matthew's:

performance poetrysurreal poetrysocial commentarysad poetryFree Versefact or fictionart
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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Novel Allen10 days ago

    Imagination at work.....so done in Paul fashion. Eggs and what...I leave that to the geniuses, Unique and elegant style..kudos.

  • Matthew Fromm17 days ago

    Appreciate the shout out!

  • Ameer Bibi17 days ago

    I really admire your writing ideas I really like it

  • Dana Crandell18 days ago

    Well, it's been way too long since I read MC. Fortunately there are translators now. A rather ominous message. It must still be early, because the only easter egg I found was Mr. Mcarthy. A very unique take, cleverly done, sir!

  • Test18 days ago

    Was waiting until I did mine to rea your or anyone's! Glad I did- this is fantastic. I love the declining feeling. Reminds me of when my laptop went on a slow and loud descent towards death. Like a decmmisioning of sorts. Anyway- RM's gonna love it I'm sure!

  • Rachel Deeming18 days ago

    I liked the fragmentedness of this, like a stuttering programme.

  • Hannah Moore18 days ago

    Well that was nearly cheerful. They made you write this you know.

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