I buried those ashes,
long since, after the flames
danced in shadowy flashes
gave you back your name
*
disposed of the flowers
threw them away
took a look in the mirror
and recollected my face
*
I may never fully know
that connection of souls
I thought, was us, all those years ago
but your love, left nothing, but a large, gaping hole
*
leaves me sinking to the bottom
while hope and dreams float
like the leaves change in autumn
they know when to let go
*
as did I, collected courage, made my getaway
not knowing how far I'd fall
penetrated by your betrayal
with no aid or backup to call
*
beginning again, this time, wide awake
learning to learn from the past
forgiving myself for my many mistakes
and living life for me, at last
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Comments (9)
Gorgeous, powerful, and emotional - I'm truly in love with this one, Kelli!
Very Powerful! I love it!
Loved this, it is so hard at times to live life for yourself, and to forgive your missteps
Forgiveness of oneself stands difficult but must be done- Well Said Kelli ❤️😉📝❗
Forgiving myself for my many mistakes. That's like the toughest thing to do! The drawing is beautiful!
Wow. That is powerful. Well done, my friend.
You could feel the ache in this. Very powerful writing
The pain of betrayal combined with loss, & yet the phoenix knows when to let go of the ashes & rise. I love Hozier.
Beautiful work, Kelli! ❤️