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And Untraceable Havens Are Better

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By The Dani WriterPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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I throw out a polite “Sometimes.”

Sometimes…

off-grid residences

are best

are lifelines

hidden from view

luxurious

captivated calm in spades

deep

within thickest rainforest of soul.

Untouched

even by angel trickle streams

where no one gives a hoo-ha

about immigration status

but is vigilant over degrees of authenticity

deficits of true self

a disharmonious rumble that makes heads turn

anathema to environment

where tranquility lives.

Sanctuary

safe from planning department permissions

and zoning laws.

You cannot mess this up.

The fixed comfortable

effortless circulation of joy.

I throw out an adamant “Always.”

Always…

endless sky-woven clouds encircle

reassure

release me.

One

oyster oasis my refuge

my center

breath

and transcendent

rest.

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Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Where is this place ? People complicate this world. Love the message in this poem 🙂

  • Oh please bring me along too! 🥺 Excellent poem! I loved it!

  • Oh please bring me along too! 🥺 Excellent poem! I loved it!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    All I can say is, when are we leaving? Love this "where no one gives a hoo-ha about immigration status but is vigilant over degrees of authenticity..."

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