And Untraceable Havens Are Better
Maximum occupancy restrictions
I throw out a polite “Sometimes.”
Sometimes…
off-grid residences
are best
are lifelines
hidden from view
luxurious
captivated calm in spades
deep
within thickest rainforest of soul.
Untouched
even by angel trickle streams
where no one gives a hoo-ha
about immigration status
but is vigilant over degrees of authenticity
deficits of true self
a disharmonious rumble that makes heads turn
anathema to environment
where tranquility lives.
Sanctuary
safe from planning department permissions
and zoning laws.
You cannot mess this up.
The fixed comfortable
effortless circulation of joy.
I throw out an adamant “Always.”
Always…
endless sky-woven clouds encircle
reassure
release me.
One
oyster oasis my refuge
my center
breath
and transcendent
rest.
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Comments (4)
Where is this place ? People complicate this world. Love the message in this poem 🙂
Oh please bring me along too! 🥺 Excellent poem! I loved it!
Oh please bring me along too! 🥺 Excellent poem! I loved it!
All I can say is, when are we leaving? Love this "where no one gives a hoo-ha about immigration status but is vigilant over degrees of authenticity..."