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Ancient

A Haiku

By J. Delaney-HowePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Ancient
Photo by Ifan Bima on Unsplash

Ancient volcano

Silent for millennia

Crater in the sky

nature poetry
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About the Creator

J. Delaney-Howe

Bipolar poet. Father. Grandfather. Husband. Gay man. I write poetry, prose, some fiction and a good bit about family. Thank you for stopping by.

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  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Wow , Excellent 🥰👌

  • Dr. Constance Quigleyabout a year ago

    Wonderful work! Good luck!

  • Dawn Saloisabout a year ago

    Beautiful haiku. There’s actually almost a sense of foreboding in this. Like the story might not be finished yet.

  • Ward Norcuttabout a year ago

    succinct and simple. it suits the image!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Outstanding! Love 2nd line "Silent for Millenia" . Just lovely.

  • Judey Kalchik about a year ago

    You are so perceptive using this form!

  • Max Russellabout a year ago

    Great anticipation carried through a very short story!

  • sleepy draftsabout a year ago

    Ouu, I love this. Your language lends so much depth and perspective to the mountain and its imprint on time. Beautiful.

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